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Just a Dream.....
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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We meet, and I look into your eyes,
I only want you, I dont want no other guys,
You look at me, and I smile,
Being with you makes my life worthwhile,
My heart skips a beat as we embrace,
Love and Happiness is written all over my face,
Its not as real as it seems,
I wake up, and its just a dream,
Were together when the sun rises and when the sun sets,
Being with you, i have no regrets,
I melt into your arms as we kiss,
You treat me like a Princess,
I love to feel your touch,
every minute with you means so much,
Dont leave me, youre the one i love,
Youre also the one im dreaming of,
Its not as real as it seems,
I wake up, and its just a dream..........
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Jenn2004
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2004-12-11 19:55:12]
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Re: Just a Dream.....
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by justjonesy on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:00:48 PM AEST
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i really liked this one.....i loved the concept
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Re: Just a Dream.....
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:05:38 PM AEST
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A masterpeice 'cause we probably all had these kinds of dreams.
Keep up the good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Just a Dream.....
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:30:03 PM AEST
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don't you wish you could just go on dreaming? I do.
good job. |
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Re: Just a Dream.....
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by Gemz_World on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:46:25 PM AEST
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| hi, i think ur poem is fantastic. It's so effective the way u've used the words. I think ur an excellent poet and u should keep writing. Well done, keep it up from Gem xx |
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Re: Just a Dream.....
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by SharonAngel on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:22:20 PM AEST
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Awesome poem...you have a great talent....keep up the great work.
Sharon |
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