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Tell Me Why
Contributed by
killingmehslowly
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:42:55 PM in AEST
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You ask me why I did it
But i don't respond
You sigh as I sit there and
Stare blankly at the wall
You try again but I deny
Finally I'll break down and cry
It hurts me to hurt you
After all thats what made me do it
You ask me again
And i sob, it's hard to be true
Why was I caught?
I need to do it
But you won't allow
This time you ask me how
And this time i'll reply
I lift the knife
I slit my wrists, i'll end my life
You'll sob and ask me why
But this time I can not reply
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Re: Tell Me Why
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by Apolla on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:46:07 PM AEST
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| It's like your telling me everything I feel without ever knowing me......I'm in love with this poem. |
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Re: Tell Me Why
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by hoist1atca on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:01:31 PM AEST
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Good Poem-
My question to you is why-
Is death the only option for acknowledgement-
I can think of other ways to get ones attention-
I'm rambling on as though I know what you felt...Sorry...
This is a good poem truley...
Joe |
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Re: Tell Me Why
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by killingmehslowly on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:13:04 PM AEST
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| thank you for your thoughts but you might have misunderstood. I don't want attention. I wrote this after recieving my mothers attention. This was an attempt to write how i feel and to answer her questions. Attention was the furthest thing from my mind, i purely wanted to write down my feelings. Death at that time would have been welcome, but rather than do that i decided to write down my feelings because i didn't want to give up completely yet. |
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Re: Tell Me Why
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by Artemis03 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:26:35 PM AEST
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| Wow.. im speechless. Completely. It's very touching to me because.. I can relate to the idea a lot. Love it. |
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