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Slowly dying
Contributed by
Apolla
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:05:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Deep inside I know that I am slowy dying,
I try with all my might to keep myself from crying.
For if I shed one tear I know,
That my pain and suffering will only grow.
So I hide my pain in the shadows of my heart,
Never letting them show or take part.
It's all bottled up inside,
Like a tidal wave from which no one can hide.
The emotions that I never let show,
Shall only continue to grow and grow.
In my heart I know they shall one day consume me,
And I will no longer be able to flee.
But until that day I shall continue to hide,
This pain that continues to devour my insides.
Copyright ©
Apolla
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2004-12-11 18:05:31]
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Re: Slowly dying
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by killingmehslowly on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:13:11 PM AEST
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| well written, very expressive. another one that gets my attention. |
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Re: Slowly dying
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:24:13 PM AEST
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| Wow. I feel that way all the time...It's like no one understands....I really like this one. ^_^ |
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Re: Slowly dying
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:39:50 AM AEST
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Very well written so much truth within.
GREAT WRITE.
~DENNIS~ |
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