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Rain
Contributed by
kaleidoscope_glasses
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:41:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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"Do you want to go outside Katie?"
"But it's raining, Davey."
"But do you want to go outside Katie?"
"Okay Davey."
"Do you feel the rain Katie?"
"Why wouldn't I Davey? "
"But do you feel the rain Katie?"
"Not really, Davey."
"Do you know why it rains Katie?'
"Well they taught us in science Davey."
"But do you know why it rains Katie?"
"I guess not, Davey."
"Do you want to stay out here forever, Katie?"
"I have things to do, Davey."
"But do you want to stay out here forever Katie?"
"Yes, I really do, Davey."
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Re: Rain
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 04:19:03 PM AEST
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I liked this. An interesting portrayal of the
difference between what people say and
mean. Good write! :) |
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Re: Rain
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 05:25:43 PM AEST
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| wow, this is great, well done!!! |
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