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fear inside
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:34:16 PM in AEST
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Maybe in another time and place
I will matter
my world around me
won't always shatter
I will be truly loved
not tossed aside
Each day I awake
the pain is there
inside ..so deep
locked up in my soul
where i keep it
growing it feeds on the best of me
enslaving me from freedom and peace
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
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Re: fear inside
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:54:53 PM AEST
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Yeah I can relate to this especially the last
line awesome poem kind of short, but
forcefully written.
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Re: fear inside
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by romayne on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:03:23 PM AEST
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| Excellent, strong poem. Romayne |
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Re: fear inside
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 04:06:52 PM AEST
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This was an amazingly powerful, emotional write...kinda felt like it punched me in the gut...I know this all too well...Excellent write
Mason |
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Re: fear inside
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by Rxqueen on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:46:03 PM AEST
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| Wow,for only taking a few minutes that rocked! It was very touching and sad. I wonder the same thing. I wonder if we will get a second chance... |
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Re: fear inside
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by DesperateSoul on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 12:33:36 AM AEST
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| Very Good!! I like the way the rhyme picked up pace at ther end!! Keep writing and keep posting always Jenni!!! D.$. |
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Re: fear inside
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:21:45 AM AEST
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great poem, deep and expressed well,
pixie xx |
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Re: fear inside
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by shelby on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:03:44 AM AEST
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powerful write
Michelle |
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Re: fear inside
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by Black13 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:24:28 PM AEST
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This one was excellent.
It was full and complete.
Darkly beautiful though.
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Re: fear inside
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by UnlovedChild on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:22:56 PM AEST
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| Simple, short and sweet, just how I like them from you. I know you can find someone to love you, but I am here and I love you!!! Great write, very powerful. |
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Re: fear inside
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 10:56:44 PM AEST
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| this was amazing. i love it. the rhythmn was incredible and i loved how the concept was portrayed. |
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Re: fear inside
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 03:50:33 AM AEST
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I like this tittle very captivating yeh pain and so much of anything elase that can enslave us, ususaly ends up in the heart zone. causing stress and just a plain intolerable situation. as i'm sure your well aware of. as always old or new, your poetry tells it like is. upfront and in your face. great 2 see u back.
keep up the good writting. i missed it.
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