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°°°A Thousand Words°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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One day Our mom was working
Her husband came to pick her up
My sis was in the car
Asking questions, so abrupt
Our mom was very happy
She surely had it all
The dream of every woman
To be happy most of all
My sis she asked her certain things
Like when can we go see aunt Hilda?
My mother stopped to glare and said
Dear who? ...Who is aunt Hilda?
She looked over at her husband
She gave him a hard nudge
For he had fallen deeply in love
With some girl from the elks club
Mom took her cigarette
She put it out right on his hand
She called him real bad names
And she got out of the car and ran
She ran straight to the bus stop
Where she made her journey home
To pack up all her things
To go to a place nobody knows
She took all of her children
She tried to do her best
But she was to poor to feed them
So she gave them back to rest
She intended on coming back for them
And back indeed she went
But he had already gotten custody
So alone my mom's life spent
I know Hilda was mean to them
My sisters and my brother
My sister's lived their own lives
Over dose of pills grabbed my brother
My family all survived this
A long time my mom hated men
But now it's all in the past
Not to be relived again
Hilda's passed away now
My mom is happy where she is
But he sits blind, crippled,and alone
This is what cheating gets
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OreO
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2002-11-27 02:00:00]
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Re: °°°A Thousand Words°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 02:21:39 AM AEST
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| This is so very sad ... words just aren't enough. I'm sorry this happened to you Oreo .... Very emotional write. |
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Re: °°°A Thousand Words°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 10:46:54 AM AEST
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OMG This was so touching Oreo,I'm so sorry ,your mom went thorough that,how hard on all of you!Cheating is wrong no matter how you look at it,its still cheating!Christina
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Re: °°°A Thousand Words°°°
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by frickinflamer on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 01:52:00 AM AEST
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wow.... love ... it sucks. hope you got through this alright. i dont know what you went through, but i probably have an idea. i didnt even have parents as a kid, and the ones i did have, they were abusive. it sucks. parents suck. but ya know we live we grow and we get through this. thanks for sharin and let a smile shine on your face as the days pass by.
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Re: °°°A Thousand Words°°°
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by Sarah22 on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 10:44:45 PM AEST
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| lovely poem :*). |
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Re: °°°A Thousand Words°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 12:38:22 AM AEST
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A very good emotional write!
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Re: °°°A Thousand Words°°°
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:00:36 AM AEST
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good poem
it is meant
to be a sad
poem we all
have sad times .
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Re: °°°A Thousand Words°°°
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by InexactExactness on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 05:57:32 PM AEST
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While Reading some of your poetry i've noticed alot of it is about family and how everyday decisions affect the stature of a family in dramatic ways. Somehow you have a way of capturing the essence of tragedy and turn something that wouldn't be spoken of and turning it into something i could read. thank you. you keep writing and i'll keep reading
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Re: °°°A Thousand Words°°°
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by nomad on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 09:57:48 AM AEST
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| A sad story, OreO. I don't feel I have the authority to say "He deserved what he got". Betrayal is cruel, in many ways, and best avoided. This is a complex issue you've addressed well here. |
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Re: °°°A Thousand Words°°°
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by Spasmodic_Reality on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 03:02:42 AM AEST
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wow..
brought back memories..
extremely excellent either way you look at it..
and very good moral! |
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