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My Poem
Contributed by
sean88
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:04:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There’s not one path in life for us both to follow,
Though it would be easier that way, I know,
The paths of school work and play,
Change year after year, day after day
But theses paths, they’re only guidelines
That change during and over time
For it is time that changes us everyday
During our work school or play
But when time changes something do precious to us
Too keep it and save it we must
Though things have change
Our friendship can stay the same
No matter where you are
I’m always going to be your shining star
Copyright ©
sean88
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2004-12-11 12:04:44] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: My Poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:09:02 PM AEST (User
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a very good wite,
pixie xx |
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Re: My Poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 01:05:56 PM AEST (User
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This was nicely writen, very heartfelt. Loves it.
hugs,
jane xx |
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Re: My Poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:29:34 PM AEST (User
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Nicely done...keep writing
Larry |
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