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I Just Lay There
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:30:05 AM in AEST
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I used to have friend I stayed at her house,
I remember you used to creep like a mouse,
I’d lay there & try to stop my breathing,
Because to you & your needs I wanted to be deceiving.
But it didn’t work for too long I have to say,
You were the first to take my innocence away,
Not with rape but with your wandering hands,
That still came from across perverted lands.
I was 11 at the time you were 18,
To touch me like a lover you were more than keen,
I remember catching my breath as I was scared,
I tried to make is so my mind was not there.
I woke up confused & frightened,
In my chest my heart muscles tightened,
As I knew that something wasn’t as it should,
I felt so dirty like I’d rolled in the mud.
But I never told not for 2 whole years,
I kept it to myself as from you I was in fear,
If I had told I knew you would come to get me,
From the nightmare I’d have never been free.
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Re: I Just Lay There
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by Infinite_Sadness on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:52:26 AM AEST
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| sorry to hear about that.. how are you coping now? (I dont usualy like to dwell on these topics like rape- but they must be talked about.) |
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Re: I Just Lay There
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:20:53 AM AEST
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Well expressed, your pain I understand to a point. I could never put myself in your shoes, but I too have had a painful time in my life. Reading this I think I can put into words now thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: I Just Lay There
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:54:26 AM AEST
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It can take so long to work through these things, but keep working. Don't ever give up.
Praying for you.
Stitch |
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Re: I Just Lay There
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by screwup on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:37:04 AM AEST
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i have tears in my eyes... this is amazing work, Krissie... you did such a good job. i know what this is like... so if you ever need to pm me and talk that would be great.
take care,
Deanna |
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Re: I Just Lay There
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:43:02 AM AEST
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| My dear, if it really happened, it was rape, pure and simple. I can't advise, but God bless and heal you, I pray. |
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Re: I Just Lay There
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by pixie on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:44:47 AM AEST
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| No Lionel, it was sexual abuse, which is not rape, rape is intercourse, and YES it did ***** happen |
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Re: I Just Lay There
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:53:53 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
Hang in there girl.
It was none of your fault.
luv, huggs, strength, healing,
emy |
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Re: I Just Lay There
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:59:19 AM AEST
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Oh hunni, I am so so sorry you had to go through this. No one desreves to go through something like that...
I am always here for you if you gotta talk, K? *hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: I Just Lay There
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:51:26 AM AEST
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The nightmare never ends
Keep writng and releasing
the pain you have deep inside.
The Wind
oh Ignore the idiot faction who continue
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