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My Only Question Is Why

Contributed by unlovedchild on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:03:21 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Laying down
I try to sleep
It is too hard with everything on my mind
No matter what I do
New problems keep interfering with my old ones
I'm starting to lose track
Of how many things happen to me
I try to think of something
Anything to take my mind off of this
But the stuff in my head won't go away
So I'm stuck wide awake
And am starting to cry
My only question is why
Why is my life the way that it is
Why can't I sleep and take my mind off of this
Why do I try to do anything at all
When I already know that I will fail
Why do I feel so helpless
This I do not know
But life is going way too slow




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Re: My Only Question Is Why (User Rating: 1 )
by tawnii on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:07:50 AM AEST
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Your poem is really good!!!! Can u look at mine please and tell me if they are good? Anyway keep on making poems they are really good!!!
*~*Shauni*~*


Re: My Only Question Is Why (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 04:03:05 AM AEST
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the answer to your questions are my poems. read my poems on god if you have faith or read my poems on virtues of life.
girish


Re: My Only Question Is Why (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 04:30:32 AM AEST
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Amy this is one nice work, very sad and emotional poem. Its very deep you really are turning into such a great poet who can express her feelings well.

Hugs,
Jane


Re: My Only Question Is Why (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:28:47 AM AEST
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a very well expressed poem, well done,

pixie xx


Re: My Only Question Is Why (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:37:21 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. I can never sleep at night, I think waaaaay to much. lol
I can't help it, and I ask that same question 'why?' all the time.
This is a very heartfelt poem.

Great write.

*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: My Only Question Is Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:58:10 AM AEST
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People forget God when everything is going well. God sends trouble our way to turn us to him, and to work patience in us, and to keep us from loving this sinful world.
Scripture proofs: Ps. 107:6 " and they cried to the Lord in their trouble, etc." Rom. 5:3 " tribulation worketh patience etc." Rom. 12:2 "be not conformed to this world, etc."
Ok, I'll shut up. God Bless


Re: My Only Question Is Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:58:57 AM AEST
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People forget God when everything is going well. God sends trouble our way to turn us to him, and to work patience in us, and to keep us from loving this sinful world.
Scripture proofs: Ps. 107:6 " and they cried to the Lord in their trouble, etc." Rom. 5:3 " tribulation worketh patience etc." Rom. 12:2 "be not conformed to this world, etc."
Ok, I'll shut up. God Bless


Re: My Only Question Is Why (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:27:59 PM AEST
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your writing is very heart felt and I too know what it feels like to ask that question and neve know if the answer you get is the right one, but never fear things will get better then they seem.

congratulation, and I am looking forword to reading more of your poetry.


Re: My Only Question Is Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:22:33 AM AEST
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Sad,but you really bring your emotions through.Keep writting each poem you write seem better than the last.
UnlovedChild---you are loved
Sinned


Re: My Only Question Is Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:12:39 PM AEST
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your writes never cease to amaze.




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