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Are you out there?
Contributed by
tawnii
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:01:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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2 years have passed since you disappeared,
i don't know if your gone for good, or if you are out there.
I will travel around the world,
just to see your face again.
I will search for you sky high,
just to hear your voice again.
I will look deep in the ocean,
just to kiss your face again.
I ask people who know you to help me find you,
but all they tell me is " He is gone for good".
When people explain to me that it would be impossible for you to be found,
I cry my heart out !!
2 years have passed since you disappeared,
and i don't care what people think but i know you are out there!!
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tawnii
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2004-12-11 02:01:30]
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Re: Are you out there?
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:32:30 AM AEST
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| i love all ff games and i love this poem |
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Re: Are you out there?
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by AliB on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:21:30 AM AEST
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Wow shauni!!!
You're a dark horse! I know nothing about final fantasy but this was very good, welcome to my other family, you'll love it here.
See you soon,
Ali xx |
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Re: Are you out there?
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by Dan666 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:52:05 PM AEST
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Hi Shauni its me Dan
very exellent poem you do have a natural talent and you are good with your words
well done
Daniel
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Re: Are you out there?
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by Gemz_World on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:54:42 PM AEST
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| Well done shauni, love the poem hope u like myn luv gemma |
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