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Revenge Is Sweet
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 01:28:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Borderline psychotic
I laugh while you're bleeding,
you scream
and cry out
but there is nothing
you can do...
ha ha ha
the look fear on your face
is priceless
your pain is now my pleasure,
resistance is useless
I'm gonna crush you.
On and on
It's never ending
open the gates of hell
you'll be screaming,
confusion and dismay
twist you around
as the pain circles back to you.
Oh I love the taste of your blood
on your emotions
I feed
like a vampire,
I laugh as you're bleeding
ha ha
I really hate you.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-12-11 01:28:42]
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Re: Revenge Is Sweet
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 01:38:48 AM AEST
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| it really sucks from this end though.. I know. but great write.. |
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Re: Revenge Is Sweet
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:04:22 AM AEST
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| omg creepy. well done!!! |
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Re: Revenge Is Sweet
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:11:13 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Revenge Is Sweet
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by DesperateSoul on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:36:40 AM AEST
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YAY!!!!! You know at least once a day i feel the same way about a couple people !! It's nice to know that there are other's out there that are sik and twisted like me!!!! Keep writing and keep posting always!!
D.$. |
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Re: Revenge Is Sweet
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 05:58:16 AM AEST
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Hmm indeed revenge is sweet, Great write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Revenge Is Sweet
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by pixie on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:55:46 AM AEST
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filled with anger and emotions, an amazing write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Revenge Is Sweet
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by givingin on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:22:52 AM AEST
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Very powerful!
I enjoyed reading this.
"Like a vampire"
one of the many creatures that fasinate me.
Powerful, great write,
keep it up
*~givingin~* |
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