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thoughts of you
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:34:09 AM in AEST
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When I'm fast asleep in my bed,
Thoughts of you in my head.
When those words were all I said,
It was the loss of you in my head.
When the the long days end,
Thoughts of "miss you" in my head.
When all my hatred is fed,
It's the thoughts of you in my head.
And when I'm finally dead...
I will have you out my head.
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Re: thoughts of you
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 01:09:29 AM AEST
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wow this is a great write.. I enjoy all of your writes .. you have a way of expressing things well and its feelings i can relate to or have related to in the past.. great job
Peace and hope
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Re: thoughts of you
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by DesperateSoul on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:38:36 AM AEST
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| Great Write!!! Keep writing and keep posting always!! D.$. |
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