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The Lily
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:12:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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No one listens anymore.
A child took my hand tonight
her blond blue eyes her careful hair
fell and fair the simple curving locks
her fingers delicate pressed and unaware
the prejudice and fear
the burden of her love.
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2004-12-11 00:12:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Lily
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:30:11 AM AEST (User
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hmm, i liked it, it was different, definitely not something you would read everyday. a great write. beautiful portrayal of innocence |
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Re: The Lily
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:13:59 AM AEST (User
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beautiful, i love it |
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