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When I Die
Contributed by
death_of_a_sinner
on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:31:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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When I die there will be no tears
When I die there I will have no fear
When I die no one will mourn
When I die it will be like i was never born
When I die my loved ones will forget
When I die they shall never regret
When I die I will find my path
When I die there will be no turning back
When I die I will return
When I die to where I belong
When I die there will be no tears
When I die I will have no fear
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2004-12-10 21:31:28]
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Re: When I Die
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by DesolantDreamer on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:39:47 PM AEST
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A qoute that goes good for this:
By killing yourself your not just killing yourself, but everyone who loves you. They will change in ways you could only imagine.
But I love your darkness and it is so moving! Keep up the good work!
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Re: When I Die
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:46:03 PM AEST
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| amazing write. though i wish this repeated when i die a little less. this was powerful and moving. but hopefully when you die is a long time from now =] |
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Re: When I Die
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by Flicker on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:12:04 PM AEST
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i hope that poem aint true.there has to be ppl that care about you.but it was a good poem.why are you worried about when you die.you should be worried about now.i hope you keep writing you are a good poet.
***Missy***
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Re: When I Die
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by screwup on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:26:02 AM AEST
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an amazing write... i can relate to this so much... you said and described my feelings so well...
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