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Cautious Words
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:16:08 PM in AEST
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Why do you find need to slander my name?
I suppose it’s to hide your own shame-
For we are not so different, you and I-
Yet still you choose to inflict pain with a lie…
Why do you tell others things that are not true?
Maybe it is so that they will think better of you-
And in doing so you can make me feel less-
Although I know this is just my own guess…
Timid people often use offensive words to speak-
For they are cowards, they know that they are weak-
And it matters not the anguish they may cause-
As they find in themselves very few flaws…
Now these few words to you I will submit-
Speak softly about things that one may transmit-
For all who know you find reason to have fear-
This is something that has been made clear…
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2004-12-10 21:16:08]
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Re: Cautious Words
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:23:58 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well with authority.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Cautious Words
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:31:11 PM AEST
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It is sad that some people lack the confidence to
be happy with who they are and thus feel it necessary
to lie about others in order to make themselves
look better. A bit of a run on sentence there, but you get
my meaning, yes?
Great poem Joe. Perfectly said!
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Re: Cautious Words
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:03:46 PM AEST
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I have been a notch and it is not a pleasant thing. You build a big wall which will be hard to bring down. Sad part, I was only one of many. I worry less about words and more about hearts that are broken into shards and lives put in disrepair. Weak is the person who hurts others with these well-aimed darts.
Rita |
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Re: Cautious Words
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:59:23 AM AEST
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| gosh..I've been a notch on so many belts LOL.. I could be the belt..or the loop..or the gun..or is it the bullet.. trouble is I never got fired..rotflmao.. just talked about..and all jammed up. |
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