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Glazed Eyes
Contributed by
blueheart
on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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The craving pricks the abused tongue,
Fogging the eyes with desperation,
The urge to drown in pools of waste,
Seeps in to numb your realization.
Your pale reaches hang over,
The battered mind needs refreshment,
The heart is thumping, breath is screaming,
One sip away from internal excitement.
The blissful toxins seduce will power,
Flowing in pretence acting as a remedy,
Lifting you up high to tear you down,
Behind glazed eyes you'll never see.
Copyright ©
blueheart
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2004-12-10 21:00:29]
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Re: Glazed Eyes
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by hoist1atca on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:45:40 PM AEST
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Good Poem-
Drinking tears at the soul without thought as to the damage that will come to be-
I know this all too well-
Hope your friend finds another way...
Joe |
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Re: Glazed Eyes
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:51:42 PM AEST
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| like most people with an addiction they dont want to stop until its too late or they dont want to stop at all. ::sigh:: |
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Re: Glazed Eyes
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:11:25 PM AEST
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| awesome.. i love it! |
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Re: Glazed Eyes
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:56:04 PM AEST
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i like this.....truely
don't stop now....
write everything! |
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Re: Glazed Eyes
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by pixie on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:57:40 AM AEST
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wow that was written excellently, great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Glazed Eyes
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 02:00:53 AM AEST
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Good writing and oh so true.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Glazed Eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:48:06 PM AEST
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very sad, i hope your friend finds what they need to be happy and also the help needed... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Glazed Eyes
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:22:38 AM AEST
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| Brief but powerful..it paints quite a sad picture...but then life itself is a really sad affair... |
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