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Room 208
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:27:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In Isolation
I feel so safe
I laugh I cry I endure...
It's so much easier this way
In this room
with the 4 walls.
friendship I tried
fell In love
and always get burned,
so I am finished with that
no more fantasies
no more falls.
I use to desire
the passion of loves fire
now I run for cover
no I don't need a kiss,
lies upon lies
feeling emotional all the time
very few moments of bliss.
Often I'm pausing
got to think things through
move In slow motion
gonna fall if I slip,
In this room I sit now
and wonder
how did I let it
get to be like this?
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-12-10 20:27:01]
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Re: Room 208
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:42:31 PM AEST
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Very sad but written with the passion in your soul.
U r a good person that helps carry the load of this planet in his heart and on his shoulders.
U will get thru my friend 'cause u sacrifice your own life to help others.
I've only seen a fraction of what it's like out there in the big city's. It's people like u that make a difference on our planet one day at a time.
Awesome writing!
Hang tuff my frend.
Luv, huggs, prayers, faith, hope, strength, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Room 208
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:56:05 PM AEST
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| amazing write. written well and captivating. |
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Re: Room 208
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:29:39 PM AEST
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| wow, this is beautiful... haunting, well done |
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Re: Room 208
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by givingin on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:18:19 PM AEST
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Good right hun.
But remember there might be some good things about that room.
It's where I met you.
MUAH!
*~givingin~* |
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