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Hero
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:25:44 PM in AEST
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You found me
When I was lost
You protected me
When I was scared
You held me
When I cried
You picked me up
When I was pushed
And helped me on my feet
You are my hero
You saved me
After my daddy died
You protect this land
And forever and always,
You are my hero.
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2004-12-10 19:25:44]
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Re: Hero
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:20:02 AM AEST
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| sounds as though you have found a hero for sure I find nothing at all wrong with this poem the style feelings and flow are incredible |
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Re: Hero
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by Hihocherio on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:00:12 AM AEST
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Its awsome that you have a hero! Everyone should.
Great poem! |
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