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Will You?
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:23:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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Will you be the one who will listen?
Or will you be the one who doesn’t care?
To busy with your own problems.
Will you be the one who stops the fight?
Or just sit there and mourn?
Just because we’ve our own problems
Doesn’t mean we can’t help others.
Are you going to be the one who stands out,
Will you be a REAL hero?
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2004-12-10 19:23:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Will You?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:12:58 PM AEST (User
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excellent write. i liked how you wrote this. questions to the reader make it much more personal. |
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Re: Will You?
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:21:05 AM AEST (User
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a great style here and something to think about your very right about the message here |
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