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MY STORM
Contributed by
karmen
on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:59:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I just wish that you could see,
the pain that you put in my eyes.
The hurt that you give me,
you make it stormy from the sunny sky's.
You are my fears,
you are my tears.
This I just wish you could see,
you make me not want to be.
I try so hard to make this be complete,
but there’s a dark cloud,
that I can’t defeat.
The thunder and yelling starts and its so loud
I really believe that one day,
we’ll break through the rain.
I don't know if right now that's to say,
cause all I feel is numbness to the pain.
As the rain gets slow,
and the thunder goes.
The lightning lights the way for us to know,
and the true you shows.
Sometimes I just want,
my life to end,
but that's almost to blunt.
All I wish for with you is time to spend.
The storm is gone now,
and finally,
you will allow,
me to tell you the truth.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2004-12-10 16:59:38]
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Re: MY STORM
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:03:50 PM AEST
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| I feel this way a lot lately... Nice Job! |
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Re: MY STORM
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:06:21 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. kind of sketchy rhyme scheme though because you dont stay consistence. some stanzas you rhyme all the words with their verses and some you rhyme two verses and the other two arent. |
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