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December in California
Contributed by
zenmind
on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:33:33 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I cannot believe how beautiful this December is,
here in Santa Cruz.
While I am used to the rude December mornings of the mid west,
I awaken here to sunny days and short sleeved shirts.
Turning my face towards the breeze,
I keep the hair out of my eyes.
Will I ever learn to truly appreciate soft moments for what they are?
undetermined,
and unjudged,
like a perfect mixture of beer and pot,
lying on the beach,
smoking a cigerrette.
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zenmind
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2004-12-10 16:33:33]
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Re: December in California
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:07:15 PM AEST
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undetermined,
and unjudged,
like a perfect mixture of beer and pot,
While i appreciate the midwest winter - I also loved these lines - |
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Re: December in California
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by Ina on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:02:38 PM AEST
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Reminds me of the Las Vegas poem that I wrote. Short, to the point but so far AWAY from the point, ya know?
Oh i could see your hair flirting with your face. Cute.
beer and pot
beer and pot
beer
and
pot
sorry am high on Nyquil.
night |
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