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Trouble
Contributed by
Beni
on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:39:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Im gonna draw a picture,
A picture with a twist,
I'll draw it with a razorblade,
I'll draw it on my wrist,
A fountain will appear,
and as it flowz,
My troubles disappear.
Copyright ©
Beni
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2004-12-10 12:39:40]
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Re: Trouble
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by namesaretaken on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 01:32:51 PM AEST
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Very cool I liked this poem because of the powerfull to the point shortness of it
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Re: Trouble
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by wakegurl77 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:08:29 PM AEST
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i know it makes your troubles dissapear but it wont solve your probems believe me it makes them worse all you get is questions and the questions make it worse then you cut more its a nasty cycle talk to someone there is something behind the "pictures" talk to someone who wont ask questions you dont want to answer talk to someone who will just listen. if you need to talk to someone you dont know im here
Allways Sincere
Leana |
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