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What is that feeling?
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What a stupid I am
dreaming at night about a man,
who doesn't even know I exist,
who doesn't know there's a mist
up there into my eye,
who doesn't know he makes me cry.
What a stupid I am
not getting involved with that man,
because of my shyness,
my genuine coyness,
because of my age
because of his image,
cause he's so wonderful to me,
anyone could easily see
the way I look into his eyes
and try to put them upon mine.
What a stupid I am,
giving my life for that unknown man,
without understanding what's there,
cause inside I feel bare,
without understanding that feeling
that keeps me believing
in a kiss or an embrace,
or just another glance upon my face...
Upon my lips,
upon my cheeks,
what's that feeling?
It's what I wish.
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LostDream
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2002-11-26 20:20:00]
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Re: What is that feeling?
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by Haku on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 09:19:55 PM AEST
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| Well done emotional write. There is nothing wrong with believing in a kiss. Believe in yourself and see you are worth it. Haku |
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Re: What is that feeling?
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 12:55:54 AM AEST
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I agree, beleive in yourself,
anything is possible. This is a
good write, Thanks for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: What is that feeling?
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by Panther_1978 on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 10:21:17 PM AEST
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| Great write LostDream! Go out there and find that man and tell him how you feel!!!
Panther |
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