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Just An Affair
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:07:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Assuagedly forgetting on purpose the heat that was there
Winded and forward bended
Cringing on despair
Chanted loudly in candle smoke choked air
I DON'T CARE
I DON'T CARE
I DON'T CARE
Learning behavior complacent like insurmountable shame
Socializing hateful fate
Now fully aware
of limitations not realized were there
I DON'T CARE
I DON'T CARE
I DON'T CARE
Cancelling invisible plans on which illusions were made
Nothing came along to change
A day to compare
What I thought was love was just an affair
I DON'T CARE
I DON'T CARE
I DON'T CARE
Escaping failed attempts to fly, I stifle tears tried to cry
Safely locked inside myself
Afraid to yell out
About what is and what is not unfair
I DON'T CARE
I DON'T CARE
I DON'T CARE
Enkindled slave to stuck in slow motion breathing not alive
I don't think I can survive
The nightmare of this
Loving you - Needing you - Without you there
I WON'T CARE
I WON'T CARE
I WON'T CARE
Copyright ©
Red_October
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2004-12-10 09:07:25]
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Re: Just An Affair
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by Stitch on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:09:05 AM AEST
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Keep chanting these mantras. A stronger person will grow from the ashes.
PM if you want to talk.
Saying a prayer for you.
Stitch |
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Re: Just An Affair
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:59:09 AM AEST
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its hard to get over...a couple months ago i had that experience of that with my ex...now he wanted it again...no way! the feelings i have...i'm not putting myself out there like that again...it can emotionaly destroy you!
great job bro be strong!
please comment on my work too
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Re: Just An Affair
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 06:01:52 PM AEST
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I felt the power in this write, and understand the need for these words, in my own perspective. Thanks for sharing this -
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Re: Just An Affair
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:47:37 PM AEST
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Lots of repose ^_^
The greatest, and most elusive, act of love, is that, when it completly enfolds us, enshrouds us, takes us captive, changes us; and i myself will repose for a moment; changes us, it gives us the finality and contentment, the need to no longer need or desire, it gives us the chance to remain as we are as we have been(and with that i mean in love) without having anyone in particular to love. This is the hardest love to carry, the hardest life to live. Past that I don't know...
Keep writing.....keep reflecting. |
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Re: Just An Affair
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by wolfman on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:53:46 PM AEST
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this was a very compeling poem and I got the sence that you are trying to get over it. have faith that you will and there will be a greater relationship to come.
it was very well writen made me take on a new perspective as a writer and as a person.
please keep writing and keep posting. tell next time, good bye. |
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Re: Just An Affair
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:10:47 AM AEST
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| well geeze affairs suck what a bast**d ah well nuttin wrong with bein single im learnin to live with it sucks but oh well |
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