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Two Steps Back
Contributed by
Chad
on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:39:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Peadels dance in the glimmering sunray
At a glance, its all beautiful today
The breeze is soft, and birds are singing
Take two steps back and what your seeing
Seems to change a bit the fruther you go
But lets just stay the two steps though
Now take a glance and what can we see
The beauty has shifted from flower to tree
The massive trunk and flourshing emrald greens
And the cute little bird is still singing
As the wind blows smothly through the leaves
The sound is is a song that weakens the nees
Take two steps back and come with me
The beauity is going to change this time
It will be for the better I am sure, you will see
Take a deap breath and close your eyes
Whats more beautiful than flowers and trees
More beautiful than songs of the bird and the breeze
Slowley open your eyes
Its a beautiful sunrise
The clouds are all shades reds and greens and blues
The Ocean you gaze over glistens and reflects the magnificent hues
The sound of the waves is so refreshing as they crash on the shore
The refreshing mist in your face wakens your
I don not know if I could show you any more
But if you come with me, I will show you how big the picture gets
Lets take our two steps,
And lets take some more,
Lets keep going back till we cant go any more,
Lets hang out in space and over look the our ball of water
Now that is beautiful, a whole world of wonder
Now listen close or the point you will not see
There is somethign more beautiful that even I cant show thee
Unless I had a mirror of course
Now do you see
Nothing can ever be more beautiful than the person seeing the beauty.
Copyright ©
Chad
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2004-12-10 08:39:15]
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Re: Two Steps Back
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:37:58 AM AEST
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Nice write! Beauty is all around yet often never found because no one wants to see the intricate linings. You have conjured beautiful images! A bit of advice? Moderators will spellcheck for you, and the words will flow without hesitation. Other than that, this is a really nice poem!
Angel always...Joni
p.s. I'm a spellcheck freak so don't mind the comment. :-) |
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Re: Two Steps Back
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 06:38:36 PM AEST
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| That was so beautiful and full of enchanting beauty. This poems is full of beautiful words I can't describe. Well, written. Excellent Job! |
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