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the movement of the love
Contributed by
holy
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:32:14 AM in AEST
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The movement of the love
want to sing in my life
let my happiness spread all over and all directions
in the passion is the pursuit not changed day by day
let every day in the life be promising
I open the heart window gently
tell your my most looking forward to
it is that you accompany me
to share weal and woe in year after year
you make my life brilliant again
Missing you deeply as you walk in the alien land far
I am looking forward to your coming back all the time day and night
hear you gentle sound of one's walking only
you will throw into my heart
sing movement of love altogether at once.
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holy
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2004-12-10 03:32:14]
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Re: the movement of the love
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:41:15 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, and so tenderare the your words of choice...flowing gently are your thoughts....into musical poetry...excellent poem wonderful to read, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: the movement of the love
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:51:13 AM AEST
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A heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: the movement of the love
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by holy on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:51:37 AM AEST
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hi,Kindredblood-dragon,nice to hear from you.
i appreciate your comment ,i adore your this name ,kind red blood -- dragon,you must be kindly and pretty.thank you again .
welcome you ,i have been married for fifteen years ,and have a nice family , i love fall in love forever......
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Re: the movement of the love
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by holy on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:54:15 AM AEST
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welcome Emystar,
very glad you are be here with me ,haha,thankful ,i can see your pretty smile ,love here ...... |
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Re: the movement of the love
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by pixie on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:12:08 AM AEST
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awww so lovely and meaningful, a moving poem Holy *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: the movement of the love
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by holy on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 06:26:17 AM AEST
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hi,pixie,best wishes.
i just had supper ,it is 20:29pm in china ,when i open computer ,your comment make my eyes bright,i am copying your lovely sweeter poem and excerpt them in my notebook,these are my museum piece(*_*). |
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Re: the movement of the love
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:39:52 AM AEST
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Stong is the emotion of love.....
Well done
Larry |
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Re: the movement of the love
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by holy on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:49:51 AM AEST
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hello ,rakerman ,
gald to know you .can you tell me about "1999"?haha,i think that must be the year in your lucky memory
welcome to china(*_*)
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Re: the movement of the love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 04:06:55 PM AEST
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| A beautiful write holy...you are very lucky! |
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