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Swimming In The Pools of The Past
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:30:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I see you there dancing under a field of shooting stars
With the oceans breeze dancing in a circle around you
You start to glow from the moons light shedding its grace on you
Your dark black hair fading into the background as if juxtapose with the scenery
To see which was more beautiful and loved most by me
Your blue eyes trap me now is they did when we first met
Your pale skin resonates with so many of its charming qualities
Its soft touch and smell of white plum flowers in bloom
Your feet kicking up sand as you dance around calling me
So I go to you and pick you up with my mighty arms
Your eyes outshine the stars in the sky
The waves come ashore to make our foot prints fade
To make it seem as if we were never there filling it with envy
We fall down and start to role around the white silk like sand
For a while till you are on top of me and kiss my tired desperate brow
Then mingle your lips with mine for one ever lasting kiss
After the kiss you stand up and run away taunting me to chase you so I do
You run fast but I catch you in the end like I always do
Then push you into the water where we are covered by a wave
As if it too wanted to play a part in our little game
I carry you in my mighty arms once more to bring you closer to where you came
As I look at you and see the sun rising behind you in the horizon
Then we start to fade out again back into my memories
And I am alone sitting on the rocks again swimming in the pools of the past
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Re: Swimming In The Pools of The Past
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:39:06 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Swimming In The Pools of The Past
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 01:43:08 AM AEST
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| Really awesome poem...tender and beautiful too, I really enjoyed reading this write...so intense and visual too...cool poem. |
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Re: Swimming In The Pools of The Past
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:22:25 AM AEST
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this is a poem i wrote earlier today i dont think anyone will like it i know i dont
Sorry i disagree this was beautiful. I really enjoyed reading. Fantastic well done
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Swimming In The Pools of The Past
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by little_genna on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:16:15 AM AEST
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John are you crazy?!?!
This has got to be one of your best poems!
It has so much imagery. Its just beautiful!
Ok it has slight sadness in it but it is just a master piece of tenderness and beauty!
You shouldnt be so hard on yourself about your ability!
Love
Stace xx |
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Re: Swimming In The Pools of The Past
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:36:08 PM AEST
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a poem filled with such ache, yet written with
such poignant imagery. I loved this poem and
I am sure the past depicted in this poem will
once again turn into reality.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Swimming In The Pools of The Past
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:31:46 PM AEST
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| it only matters if you like it, so start liking your poems like everyone else. |
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Re: Swimming In The Pools of The Past
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:05:36 PM AEST
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| This was a beautiful poem. |
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