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Why Does It Get Harder
Contributed by
unlovedchild
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:17:55 AM in AEST
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Every day gets harder
I can barely breathe
Is this some way to punish me
What have I done wrong to deserve this life
Do I get this because I'm bad
Or am I just plain sad
Give me an answer please
I can't take not knowing why life is this way
Tears that come to me every night
Seems like another way to ruin what is left of my life
Well it feels like I will never know
Why I have to live through all this hate
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2004-12-10 00:17:55]
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Re: Why Does It Get Harder
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:32:07 AM AEST
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| this is really a rgeat write one i can relate to |
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Re: Why Does It Get Harder
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 01:54:16 AM AEST
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This poem I can relate too, though more to my past than now...hate I lived with and bled by as a result to others wellaimed anger...
You have capture the true essence of what many go through in life well written and beautifully composed. |
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Re: Why Does It Get Harder
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by Angelochek on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 02:22:07 AM AEST
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well first of all its a great poem with lots of questions, and if you'd let me i would like to answer part of it,
Life is like a hill the older you get the higher you go and the harder it gets, but always remember that you are in control of how much pain you have to go though. Just look to the top smile and say "when i get there i will look at this with a proud smile" i know it always helps me... keep writting
xoxo,
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