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one messed up nursery rhyme
Contributed by
imalive_enoughsaid
on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:09:34 AM in AEST
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Run , run , run
as fast as a horse
you cant catch me
im a rotting corpse
fly away , fly away ,
fly away home
but home was broken down ,
and now im left alone
hush little baby
dont say a word
mommas gonna kill you
if she finds out what you heard
hey diddle diddle
with the cat and the fiddle
my heart jumped over the moon
the little bastard laughed
to see that she loved him
and then ran away with a spoon
and heres another bubble
i feel i need to burst
mother gooses life was *****
and was constantly getting worst
cuz' mother goose lived ,
in one ***** up shoe
everything fell apart
and there was nothing she could do
So in the end , the three little piggys
never built a brick house
they kept trying and trying to build something strong
but the wolf always blew it down...
till they got tierd of trying,
became bitter and cold
and stayed that way forever
till they died when they were old...
THE END (sAd eNdInG mUsIc)
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Re: one messed up nursery rhyme
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:23:46 AM AEST
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| As strange as it is I love it. Great write. |
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Re: one messed up nursery rhyme
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:35:16 AM AEST
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I had to read this it is awsome an d i really like it very much as much as i like to touch dear i say what maybe not let me leave you with that little thought
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Re: one messed up nursery rhyme
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 02:01:44 AM AEST
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| Freaky and weird yet well written really enjoyed reading it and had a laugh at the way you twisted the rymes well done. |
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Re: one messed up nursery rhyme
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:34:12 PM AEST
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very strange... but really good...
i enjoyed reading this...
it was a great poem...
hope to c more from u soon
Jishes |
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