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its dry
Contributed by
briefcircle
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:02:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Im might not make much sense to you.
I dont want to be the hope that you sink your hooks into.
Because im the The first Person That you cant See through
You can compliment yourself Because I’m not confused
Tie you up stay still, so I can get inside you head
And I know you made it hard
But you have to lay inside your bed
Chew you up and spit you out
And we still dont even know each other
Next time I’ll make them wait 2 weeks
Before they get a chance to smother
To you I’m just a trophy
Resembling a stripper from quebec
So now I just date ugly guys
So that they’re egos are in check
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2004-12-09 22:02:44]
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Re: its dry
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:07:04 PM AEST
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| hello again =] excellent write. i loved that ending, it was a slap in the face to guys who dont think they are ugly. pride, conceit, and egos are the biggest turnoffs or turnoffs for some people though. |
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Re: its dry
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:22:57 PM AEST
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| yea what she said im ugly and proud and egos suck good write |
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Re: its dry
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:13:11 PM AEST
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So now I just date ugly guys
So that they’re egos are in check
Not a bad idea, actually. Steer clear of the modern me-culture whenever possible. Also make certain you do not contribute to it by your own attitude. All of us have a hard time with pride and selfishness.
Slàn
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