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Don't Leave Me.
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:48:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Why are you leaving?
Do you not care?
While I wonder alone
Lost in this world?
Do you not care?
I saw him turn to me,
He came and leaded me
Into the light,
Away from the dark
I finally found someone who cared.
He took me in.
Gave me warmth.
He didn’t judge me.
I felt cold no more.
Then, two years after the night we met.
I lost the only thing I had.
As he was walking away,
A loud shot was heard.
I fell to the ground weeping.
I am alone again.
I cannot be alone.
Not again.
All I could hear was my tears hitting your soft, cold, dead skin.
“Don’t leave me…Please.”
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2004-12-09 18:48:59]
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Re: Don't Leave Me.
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 07:49:08 PM AEST
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| this actually made me shiver..the thought of tears falling on cold dead skin.. very visual... |
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Re: Don't Leave Me.
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 09:47:30 PM AEST
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| for something you just wrote this seemed very realistic and powerful. full of emotion. |
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Re: Don't Leave Me.
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by pixie on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:25:42 AM AEST
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chilling and dark, very good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Don't Leave Me.
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by shelby on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:22:17 AM AEST
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| this brought a tear to my eye I hope this was a fictional piece and not something that happened to you in real life so very sad |
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Re: Don't Leave Me.
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by burningintherain14 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:11:59 PM AEST
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| the imagery was amazing, very strong, also very sad! Nice write. |
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