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The Tears Took Over
Contributed by
LilGnefkow
on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:16:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tears streaming down my eyes
Can anyone hear my cries?
All the rainbows are out of sight
Every day feels like night
Darkness from inside pours out
I can't do anything but doubt
Nothing ever goes my way
Nothing ever is OK
When I close my eyes, I see black
You are what I now lack
You ask me why, but I can't say
I'm thinking of you every day
Nothing can change what you said
I think about it every night before bed
Nothing can fix this big mess
I hate having all this stress
You can't do anything to help me
My eyes can't help but get misty
When memories of us fill my head
But still, nothing changes what you said
Copyright ©
LilGnefkow
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2004-12-09 17:16:28]
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Re: The Tears Took Over
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:19:40 PM AEST
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awww this is so moving, emotional and sad,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Tears Took Over
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:38:11 PM AEST
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very nice write, i liked the ending very much, its a great ending to the poem, well done
Jenni xxoo |
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