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Forbidden Hearts
Contributed by
mia
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 04:22:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I met you underage
You thought i was old enough
I told you lies
My parents forbid this love we have
But when i told you the truth you were glad
We make the perfect couple
We make the perfect hearts connect
I will always be here, as you said
I will believe, as our love is forbidden & i love you so.
When we show much we care for each other
They will too
Copyright ©
mia
... [
2004-12-09 16:22:00]
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Re: Forbidden Hearts
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by Greg_Skellington on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:48:19 PM AEST
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i like this, its kinda like when i dated a 13 year old chick when i was 17
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Re: Forbidden Hearts
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by paula_kay23 on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 09:56:04 PM AEST
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hope you care enough for each other to write a bit more.
if you do you might make a few more good poems |
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Re: Forbidden Hearts
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by xtremcalibur on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:27:53 PM AEST
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| With a little polishing, you could make this poem a good read. Your attempt at writing is a good start. With a little more thought, it will be a good poem. It is just my opinion. |
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