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SHE DIES
Contributed by
lemmen
on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 02:22:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The blood dries upon her wrist.
As she cries for her life is
a waste.
She cries for death but cannot
Cut deep enough.
The is just to great.
She tries again and again
each cut deeper than the
Last and still not deep enough.
The pain of her life.
The rape of her body.
The torment of her soul.
Death is her only way out
And yet she cant.
Tears fall from her eyes,
Her heart sinks,
Her head falls.
The pain is just so great
she can hear the flesh
As it tares.
She continues to cut
To bleed.
Then suddenly it happens
the veins burst blood
Splatters.
On the bed,
On the walls,
On the floor.
She screams a blood scream
A death scream.
As she falls on the bed a
Smile falls across her face.
Her pain is fading.
Her life is ending.
Her dreams have become
Fulfilled.
AS SHE DIES.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
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2004-12-09 14:22:40]
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Re: SHE DIES
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by taryn on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 02:57:37 PM AEST
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| very deep. i liked it a lot. great write! |
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Re: SHE DIES
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by witch_derna on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:15:39 AM AEST
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| Touching write. Thats what I use to do when I cut, pray for the strength to cut deep enough..... Not any more, thanks to you my love. |
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Re: SHE DIES
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by lifeslittleangel on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 12:23:14 PM AEST
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this is a great poem,i love it
it does show her pain i know what its like i used to cut and the only person who knew was my best freind ashlie she gave the hope and showed me what it would be like with out me and i thank her for that
ill say it again this poem is great if i had to rate it u would all ten and above keep it up |
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