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The Knife
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:47:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She looks at his picture
Then picks up the knife
Maybe it's time to end his life
Like it would matter
He's dead to her now
Maybe she'll get caught
But he'll be dead
That's all she wants
For him to pay for what he's done
So she gets her things
And leaves for his house
This won't take long
He won't know what hit him
I'll just do it and leave
He deserves this she thinks
She stops in front of his house
There's someone else there
I'll just wait for her to leave then
Or maybe I'll take them both
She thinks about this for a moment
Then decides that's what she'll do
So she gets her stuff
And starts for the house
The door is unlocked
So she lets herself in
She hears them talking in his room
They don't have the slightest idea what's about to happen she thought
She walks to his room and opens his door
What are you doing here he says
I came to say good bye
Knife in hand she moves towards the bed
Starts with the girl
Finishes her
Moves towards him
Please don't do this he begs
This is what you deserve she says
And then it begins
They're gone now
Both of them
This is what they deserved she thought
And now here she sits
In this little white room with paded walls
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Re: The Knife
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:49:19 AM AEST
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bloody hell where did that come from? well where ever it did, it was brill, hope you got some more stored up where this came from,
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Re: The Knife
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by fenriquez on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 03:35:58 PM AEST
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| that was wicked nice. i liked good job |
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Re: The Knife
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by bloodytears77 on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:35:41 PM AEST
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| i love it, no matter where it came from, its wonderful!! i luv it! |
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Re: The Knife
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 11:43:52 PM AEST
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haha great poem. I didn't think it was too
psychotic at first but after the line when she
said I've come to say goodbye then yeah it
became rather psychotic. Great poem I loved
it a lot of my favourite poems come out of
nowhere as well.
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Re: The Knife
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:45:41 AM AEST
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where ever the hell this came from it was excellent. Bravo.... Dark and emotional and yes alittle pyschotic!
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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Re: The Knife
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:12:36 AM AEST
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this is a brilliant poem.....dark and definately psychotic...i loved it....great job
Lots of Love
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