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In My Lonely Bed
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:10:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I woke up this morning in my lonely bed,
I think me & unhappiness finally have wed,
Missing you there I lay all alone,
Longing to hear the tinkling of my phone.
I touched the pillow where you usually lay,
This I know is going to be a long, long day,
It will drag as it does when I am by myself,
Feel like just sitting upon the unhappy shelf.
Bed feels cold where it usually feels warm,
I know now I am vulnerable against the storm,
How I long to see your head on your pillow,
Stop me from feeling like a little weeping willow.
I pulled the covers just the little bit higher,
To try to compensate for the lack of your fire,
But it just didn’t feel the same, nowhere near right,
Still I pull the covers around me so tight.
I close my eyes & imagine that you are there,
I feel lonely, I can’t feel you loving stare,
The one you do when you look at me asleep,
The one I know that in my heart I’ll forever keep.
I lay there thinking only of you,
Wonder if you are thinking of me too,
I can’t wait until I hear my phone as it rings,
As I know it’ll be you with a message of love to bring.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-09 10:10:09]
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:15:25 AM AEST
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aww pix you old romantic, well done you! that feeling of loneliness when you're used to someone next to you can be a killer. Good poetry.
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:41:46 AM AEST
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A very loving and romantic poem. Beautifully written with a wonderful rhyme and flow. Your feelings come through very strong.
Willofree
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:53:48 AM AEST
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Ahh... the tender moment of longing afer they have left for the day. The only warmth is the daggone pillow! This was very well done girlfriend! Took me to that place of longing, anticipating the ring of the phone! Ahh... sheer bliss!!!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:58:49 AM AEST
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Pixie this was a beautiful write. Be kind to yourself. Have some chocolate or something you enjoy.
All the best. |
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by FlawlessMistake on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:59:04 AM AEST
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Awwwww....This poem is so sweet! Thanks for sharing! And thanks for your comment on my poem, it means alot.
FlawlessMistake
~hannah~ |
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 11:36:03 AM AEST
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| awww....pixie! so sad, i know the feeling. you are such a good poet. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:48:55 PM AEST
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aww pixie Awesome write.. well expressed and so sad!!
Peace and hope
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by holy on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:03:45 PM AEST
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exciting,this is very great to waiting for love......
sweet and pretty ,feeling the same..... |
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:08:03 PM AEST
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You capture the feelings so well.I know I'd rather be with my love than have to lie there alone.....it isn't just the bed that feels empty when your partner isn't there, it's your heart too
Steve |
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by Sinned on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:17:17 AM AEST
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Aw ! Pixie you have a way with words.Nice flow.well written.Keep it up.
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by pander on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:25:10 AM AEST
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I've said it before, but I'll say it again. He's a very lucky guy!
Nice write Pixie!
Luv,
Pander
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by justjonesy on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:30:34 PM AEST
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| this one really hit home, but me being the guy waiting for the girl....great job.....i still have yet to see you write a poem that is even near not being perfect....keep it up |
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Re: In My Lonely Bed
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 05:03:37 PM AEST
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| aw that's so sad but wonderful. beautifully done as always. |
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