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Detriment
Contributed by
MasterWeasel
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Once I was good I used to be more
But that part of me I now ignore
I look inside me but cannot find
The man who was sweet of the man who was kind
He must have died long ago
For I can't seem to make him show
All that's left within me now
Is the evil I once did not allow
It seems I have my self to blame
For wickedness I could not tame
It tainted me and broke my will
My better half it made me kill
I look to the heavens and ask them why
Why can't it leave, why can't it die
Its corruption surges through my veins
And gives me such tremendous pains
How did I ever end up this way
What made me go so far astray
It's always there inside my head
It will not stop until I'm dead
So now I'll make a solemn vow
That with this blade my curse ends now
Copyright ©
MasterWeasel
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Re: Detriment
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:57:44 AM AEST
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| Wicked good. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Detriment
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by holy on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 09:04:12 AM AEST
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| very well ,rhyme and clear ,everyone should be justicial and righteous ,love to read and think ,thanks a lot |
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Re: Detriment
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 09:27:27 AM AEST
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Few poems like this do so much with rhyme. It is a constant fight, but He who has begun a good work in you will see it completed.
Stitch |
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