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Captured
Contributed by
sweetansexy
on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:32:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Captured
That’s what you did to my heart.
This darkened blood filled chamber
Is now your residence.
A section 8 of sorts, your rent; paid by me
You feed off of my fears and attack me from within.
You give me just enough to sustain
I am dying
Each piece of me shutting down, until I exist no longer,
You have taken over my being
Circulating through me until I am now apart of you.
My only recourse is submission
I quietly beat for the last time on my own
Hoping you have enough to sustain us.
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sweetansexy
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2004-12-09 08:32:00]
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Re: Captured
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:36:35 AM AEST
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ohh hun this is so sad, very sad, written from your heart and written with such pain behind the words
pixie xx |
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Re: Captured
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by Karls on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:43:23 AM AEST
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| really good, i love how you use the heart as your controlling idea |
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Re: Captured
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by Remi on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:24:52 AM AEST
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| Very deep how how person make u feel great tellin your emotional in this |
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