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Clouded
Contributed by
Karls
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:25:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Looking up with youthful eyes
A young girl with clouded views
Admiration for a man that I never really knew
Daddy:
The humble, the few
Values stuck inside your throat
Wash them down and breathe in deep
Hide behind the empty bottle that now sings you to sleep
And pray the Lord
Your soul to keep
Looking back on years gone by
My youth has served me well
I've seen the good, I've seen the bad, been to the depths of hell
And regretfully played
The cards you dealt
Looking down with conscious eyes
Aged long before their time
I'll chase the memories of childhood out of my grown-up mind
Father,
I'll be fine
Copyright ©
Karls
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2004-12-09 08:25:52]
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Re: Clouded
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:27:50 AM AEST
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very well composed, a good write,
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Re: Clouded
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 11:24:39 AM AEST
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i agree with pixie...
you did an amazing job....
please comment on my work too
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