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Sitting On The Moon
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:34:16 AM in AEST
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I am sitting on the moon,
Hoping that you will come back to me soon,
I gaze into the starry sky,
Wishing I had wings so I could fly.
Fly straight to where you are now,
I really want to but I don’t know how,
My love for you is like a red, red rose,
You are the voice I hear when the wind blows.
I think the moon can feel my pain,
As his once happy face shows the strain,
He hands me a tissue as a single tear falls,
I push it away as I hear unhappiness call.
I miss you so much when you’re not here,
My heart feels at ease when you are near,
But here I will sit until you return,
For your loving embrace my heart does yearn.
I lay on the moon as I cry myself to sleep,
The moon seems sad as he hates it when I weep,
When I wake you’ll be back by my side,
No longer behind my tears my face will have to hide
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pixie
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2004-12-09 06:34:16]
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Re: Sitting On The Moon
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:43:22 AM AEST
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| I love this one Pixie..Your writing is realy so great..Your a thinking man's poet.. |
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Re: Sitting On The Moon
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:53:26 AM AEST
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Pix i love this, you really do blow me with your writing. Good Write.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Sitting On The Moon
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 07:05:40 AM AEST
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awwww..... touching and soo sweet, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Sitting On The Moon
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by OnAngelswings on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 07:15:02 AM AEST
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| so sweet....you make it look so easy...beautiful write...Shari |
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Re: Sitting On The Moon
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 07:59:20 AM AEST
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*sits on the moon with you*
That was really beautiful, and so sad.
BS xxx |
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Re: Sitting On The Moon
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by holy on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:09:10 AM AEST
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very great pixie, i had been sitting on the moon to waiting for my love in my dream too,and i got it now ,i have a happy family and living ,you can too ,hope you all the best .
yes,when you wake your love will be back by your side and with you accompany all the time ,for your loving embrace your heart does yearn.
pixie ,thanks for your thought and starry sky ,i am gazing love sky and best wishes to you ,can you hear my singing |
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Re: Sitting On The Moon
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 09:40:23 AM AEST
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| I think of the moon weeping and the tears are twinkling little stars... |
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Re: Sitting On The Moon
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:21:05 AM AEST
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excellent write pix, wish i was up there myself at times!
johnny. |
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Re: Sitting On The Moon
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by Remi on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:27:18 AM AEST
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| Really sweet and sad i like it alot |
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Re: Sitting On The Moon
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by pander on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:16:14 AM AEST
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Such a sweet poem Pixie.
Keep it up!
Luv,
Pander
xxxx
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