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Youth..
Contributed by
Embracing_Darkness
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:15:02 AM in AEST
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What's wrong with me?
How's my hair?
Am I too fat?
I DON'T CARE!
Does he still like me?
Is she my friend?
Why do you hate me?
WHEN WILL THIS END?
Is my eyeliner smudged?
Heard about the fight?
Do you have some lipgloss?
THIS ISN'T RIGHT!
Stereotypes,
Boys and girls,
Depression and dramas
In a teenagers world
Suicide threats
Some true, some not
Drinking and parties
Who knows when it stops?
Acceptable ignorance
Innocent fun
You feel so grown up
But your life has just begun
Don't ignore your youth
Don't turn out like me
With a space inside me empty
Where my youth should be
Don't grow up too fast
To make yourself look 'cool'
Just be who you are
Not everyones fool
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Embracing_Darkness
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Re: Youth..
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:19:35 AM AEST
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Wow, Great poem! I really love the message. It almost screams it at you. A powerful poem.
I understand though, all these things... too true.
Great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Youth..
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:54:39 AM AEST
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yeah a very true write, very well expressed, great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Youth..
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:01:19 AM AEST
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| good write we all are growin to fast soon we're gunna be like 80 er sumthin thats gunna suck |
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Re: Youth..
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by Summerwine on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 09:47:47 AM AEST
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| This was great and so very true... If only the kids would take your advice! |
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Re: Youth..
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by Remi on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:35:26 AM AEST
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| Old memory from high school but high school can be depression and it so hard for kids who are confuse to take good advice u just gave but that i felt in high school these was most of my thought that went thur my head while i was stiitn their |
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Re: Youth..
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:35:23 PM AEST
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| I found, in my life, in my journey to the desert to the mountains to the warm, rainy beaches of the gulf coast( and am still learning) is that no one really wants to listen. People are happy in their shallow, empty lives. They don't know what fulfillment is. They look and say you are the empty one. And maybe their right, maybe knowing, or seeing what is really there, puts a hole in us that can't be filled; by anything. I've ripped a hole in my throat teaching the so called falsities that i see. I've cried for people I don't even know. The best way to make them understand, is to accept what they are. accept their infinite delusion, because for all it's worth, you can't change it. Nice words, keep thinking. Always, abraham ^_^ |
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