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PLEASE KILL ME....................................
Contributed by
veenu
on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 04:54:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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imaginations now become truth,
love become curse,
for what iam alive,
plz..........kill me i dont want to go any more mile...........
i am in love,
with you and you jagged a knief within............
plz..kill me with your unfair hand,
because i believe you as i stand...............
my heart broked and pieces of it misplaced,
dull expression on my face,
for that we are no longer at the same place,
and my bad luck u appreciate,
with a laughing face............
not to be on the same gate.......
i say why thats me and without any reason that u hate................................
Copyright ©
veenu
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2004-12-09 04:54:32]
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Re: PLEASE KILL ME....................................
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:08:36 AM AEST
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| i like this poem thingy wasnt too bad i wanted to be killed cuz my heart was crushed but we all must go on |
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Re: PLEASE KILL ME....................................
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by Remi on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:29:56 AM AEST
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| I like this alot kinda remind me of one my time in life but u grieve, but must move on eventually |
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Re: PLEASE KILL ME....................................
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by dalamar on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:04:24 AM AEST
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| I love this poem. It is true most do move on but some people never heal when they do move on. It will always be there to stab you again but the next time you will be ready. |
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Re: PLEASE KILL ME....................................
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:31:02 AM AEST
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Your poem really moved me when i read it.
Be stronge and if you ever wanna talk pm me .well done. |
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Re: PLEASE KILL ME....................................
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 05:16:56 PM AEST
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| This is a good and very sad write i know how you feel all to well |
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Re: PLEASE KILL ME....................................
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by Naveen on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 01:21:03 AM AEST
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Thats great poem well written and emotions
abounds, your poems have that fire. It great
Have a nice and great day
Bye! |
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