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Naomi
Contributed by
Adam_me2
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 04:06:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Each time I am without you,
I beckon to your soul,
Remain with me hereafter,
Must I speak my heart in vain..
You are my first thought this morn,
and my last sweet thought the moro.
You are my one and only
Though you fear my truth, I jest and jape.
For purile deeds, hold not to you,
I curse them all, each day.
My meaning to be plainer,
Is that, I loath the wrongs I do,
I thank you, for remaining hereafter,
For the one I love is you.
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Adam_me2
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2004-12-09 04:06:29]
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Re: Naomi
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:46:14 AM AEST
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This is beautiful....
Jenni |
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Re: Naomi
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by Remi on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:37:15 AM AEST
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| very beauitful and strong in the way of the wordin so keep up the good work |
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Re: Naomi
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:40:26 PM AEST
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a very lovely poem and a great choice of words. my favourite lines are
"I beckon to your soul,
Remain with me hereafter,
Must I speak my heart in vain.."
very well done |
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Re: Naomi
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by Lilly-Quill on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 01:50:41 PM AEST
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Oh so unique and brilliantly enchanting, I love this. Do be encourage and keep up the great writing.
~Lilly-Quill |
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