|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The most painful words
Contributed by
lonithion
on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 02:16:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
You took my pen and wrote on my arm.
You left four little words that are forever burned in my mind.
"don't forget to smile"
How can one smile when his first love ever, is leaving him forever.
In my life I have been cut and stabbed, battered and bruised, but these four painful words...
I can feel the coldness of them as they rip and tear my heart in pieces with the force of rabid pack of wolves.
why must I be forced to remember you through pain?
why did you have to go...
and where will it leave me?
Copyright ©
lonithion
... [
2004-12-09 02:16:05]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The most painful words
(User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 03:41:23 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| ha! I've been there. Don't worry, it get's easier. She probably just wanted you to understand that no matter what, everything will be ok. And it will be.....unless you're hit by a car or die in some horrible twist of fate....but hey life is like that ^_^ |
|
|
Re: The most painful words
(User Rating: 1 )
by dalamar on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 04:57:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| That is hard to hear. I hope that is gets better for you. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
