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Confusion
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 02:01:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I never know where to turn
Or when to step on back
I look into the mirror
and see a smiling face just staring back
Thoughts are just a fairytale
Dreams are but a wish
Reality is so frightening
but what is real?? what does exist??
I am blundering with trouble
and filling up with steam
Feeling all these things inside
not knowing what it means
Maybe I do love you
or maybe its false hope
Never knowing where to turn
Afraid to fall back in the dirt
Frustration is a word
a word so hard to understand
Like many things that are set forth
in this very land
Tears are drops of moisture
but why they do exist??
No one knows for certain
but I can tell you just this:
We cry when we are angry
and when we're feeling blue
we cry for all the happy times that we are not feeling all our gloom
I often wonder why I wonder
why do I feel these things?
What do I even feel?
Is it happiness or pleasure
Sacrifice or true love
I cant even explain to you what brewing on inside of me
prehaps maybe... could you??
I wish I had the answers
a decoder for my mind
I feel bad for even asking
but that would save me so much time
Is there a meaning to this puzzle?
Is there a meaning to this life?
I ask you all these questions?
but yet Im still not satisfied
Please help me find the meaning
i am curious ... cant you see?
Why do we feel these things inside
now answer me ... why me?
What is it that I am telling you
for that I do not know
Confusion is a funny thing
my mind goes on to show...
ill never have the answers until all time has passed
The feelings that Im feeling if they are really even there
Are little things inside my head
that cease to fail me while I exist
I look into the mirror
and watch my swirling mind
filled with all the torment... and the pleasure.... consuming all my life!
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-12-09 02:01:39]
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Re: Confusion
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 02:08:46 AM AEST
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Very powerfull masterpeice 'cause we all have our questions.
Keep up the awesome writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Confusion
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 03:51:44 AM AEST
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| do ya know what sanity is? sanity is coping with the world around you. I lack sanity, i can't cope with the world. emotions aren't real...on a certain level. emotions are something we create to cope with situations in our daily lives. writing is imagining situations and creating emotions for them. so next time you feel sad or bad or whatever, just imagine a different senario.....create a new emotion ^_^ |
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Re: Confusion
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by positivelypurple on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 03:36:12 PM AEST
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| You are very in tune with your emotions. Your inner conflict is nicely illustrated here. Don't let anyone hold you back from happiness. :) Beautifully done! |
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Re: Confusion
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 12:11:19 AM AEST
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EVERY TIME YOU TURN,IT FEELS LIKE YOUR MIND IS ABOUT TO BURN!
EVERY TEAR THAT YOU MIGHT CRY,IS JUST ANOTHER FEAR THAT GAVE YOU A TRY!!
BUT AS IT'S OVER & NO LONGER EXIST,
LOOK CLOSER INTO THE MIRROR & REALIZE THAT YOU & YOUR GRACIOUS HEART ARE DIFFENENTLY ON THE TOP OF EVERY ONES LIST!!! (especially mine)!!!!
POWERFUL & PRETTY POEM,THAT HAS TO COME FROM SOMEONE THAT KNOWS ALOT ABOUT LOVE & BEING SO SPECIAL,
YES~I'M TALKING ABOUT YOU!!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!! |
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