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Maybe I Should Hide
Contributed by
unlovedchild
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:37:04 AM in AEST
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Moving forward
Day after day
Time slowly passing by
Never know when the tears will hit me
Maybe I should hide
So no one else will have to see my pain
It shows with the drop of a tear that runs down my face
If someone had to see this they might think that I'm a disgrace
Sad days and horrible nights
All of which I have
If this pain would leave my side maybe I could see
How it feels to not deal with this anymore
I wish that my troubles would fade away
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unlovedchild
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2004-12-09 01:37:04]
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Re: Maybe I Should Hide
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:41:06 AM AEST
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| this is really a good write and i can't help but feel as if i helped inspire it i really do like it great write |
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Re: Maybe I Should Hide
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:47:47 AM AEST
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aww this is a very good expression amy I liked this alot.. sometimes we need to cry to let out hurt.. its better than to bottle it up inside.. you are a great person and don't let anyone tell you differently.. this pain shall pass and remember it can't rain all the time
Peace and hope
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