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Last Goodbye
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:01:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As i lay here in my bed
All these feelings swell up inside of me
I wonder what you're doing
As your beautiful face is all i see
I think of how we touched each other
And the honesty in your smile
I cannot begin to explain how precious this made me feel
Making every second worthwhile
Will it take all my being to forget you?
As i fight back these tears of sadness
My heart is left empty and incomplete
As i start to think that love is madness
I can see your hand upon stomach
You said this was your fetish, and your touch felt so true
I close my eyes and pray to God
To stop this deadly hurt im going through
My soul and spirit is now broken
As i learn you are moving away
The deep sorrow builds up inside
Kissing her goodbye, with me you cannot stay
My only comfort is from these teardrops
Falling from my weakened eyes
I never knew love could be so harsh
When all your happiness dies
This is pure torture
Being left alone and without you
Knowing you have to leave afar
Will my shattered hope ever renew?
More than anything in this world
I wish i could have you again for one day
To kiss and treasure your smile
And make you feel alive in an incomporable way
For one night you were my lover and a friend
The short time that we spent together
In my dreams shall never end
I know i may never see you again
Or stare deeply into your eyes
It tears my heart in two to think
We may never say our last goodbyes
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2004-12-08 22:01:15]
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:38:06 AM AEST
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aww this is a sad and beautiful write.. sometimes we have to draw our own conclusions when you don't get closure on something .. it helps you mend faster..
peace and hope
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by Trisha on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:59:56 PM AEST
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| hey this is good. i liked it |
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 12:41:56 AM AEST
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| This is a really good write, hope to see alot more of your writings. |
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:47:31 AM AEST
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| Awe i agree with Purgatori coz this is more than just "agood write" |
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 02:04:48 AM AEST
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| This is really such a sad write and its so well written though i think that makes it even more sad coz how stronly you felt it |
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by ForgottenTear on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST
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as a very emotional person, i can admit that this poem like made me tear up, it really touched me, bravo! its really is a 5 star poem
-Bex |
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 08:37:34 AM AEST
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very painful......never did get to say goodbye...
Love,
Umang |
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 02:40:17 AM AEST
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| Awesome write. Although it's sad, I like it a lot. |
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by Scarlett on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:36:07 AM AEST
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that was very moving, full of emotion. really liked the line "the honesty in your smile". nice mental image.
hope this helped you vent the way you felt. was certainly lovely to read x x x |
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:19:28 PM AEST
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magnificent pain in your writes
almost brought me to tears this one did.
much love and happiness to you-
B
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:25:29 PM AEST
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OMG!! This says exactly how I am feeling tonight...... amazing write....
Jenni |
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