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Wishin upon a Star
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:27:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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At night before i go to bed, I wish upon a Star,
How i wonder where you are,
Up above a World so high,
like a Diamond in the sky,
Only if life could be like making a wish,
Instead of being ****** up like this,
How i dream of the day we finally meet,
I wish someone would sweep me off my feet,
Someone to take away my pain,
Someone in my life to keep me sane,
Wonder if i should keep on wishin upon a star,
I hope someone is out there wherever you are
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2004-12-08 20:27:32]
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Re: Wishin upon a Star
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:39:30 PM AEST
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Good write.
A amasterpeice as we all wish on the stars.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Wishin upon a Star
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by punkpoet on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:55:47 PM AEST
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Hey nice rhyming i liked this a lot.. i like writing lil things like this .. this is much better then wat i write though
nice work...
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Re: Wishin upon a Star
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:34:11 PM AEST
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| original write. written well. |
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Re: Wishin upon a Star
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:00:41 AM AEST
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oohh lovely, yes wishing upon star is something we have all doen at times in our life, very good write,
pixie xx |
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