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I'm Sorry
Contributed by
blondienk
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Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Starin blankly into the stary sky
Tears start formin but i try not to cry
Im sittin here all alone thinkin bout you
I'm so sorry ..i wish you knew
I'm sorry for all the mistakes i've made
The last thing I want is for our love to fade
Please forgive me one last time-
Look me in the eyes and tell me you'll be forever mine
Tears fall from my eyes
Cause I want to be with you till the day I die
The thought of losin you breaks my heart
All this pain, tears me apart
I look up and see a shootin star
And I wish that you'll never be too far
For me to hold you tight-
And look into your eyes n promise u there will never be another fight
Now i'm all cried out
But you is all I can think about
I see the sun risin, it's gettin bright
So I'll go inside and turn out the light
Climb in my bed and go to sleep
As one last tear rolls down my cheek
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blondienk
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2002-11-26 10:30:00]
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 10:35:06 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful expression
of your love, hope he see's this
True love can overcome anything
if you both want it badly enough
Thanks for sharing this one
i enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 11:10:32 AM AEST
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"Climb in my bed and go to sleep
As one last tear rolls down my cheek" beautiful ending... good write |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 10:57:02 PM AEST
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This is pretty! Sad, but touching...and sweet. Very sweet.
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Dark_Angel_BabAy on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 12:02:34 AM AEST
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| This poem is awesome, I know how it feels to want the person you love to be there for you and to forgive you, it hurts it really does, maybe one day you will find them again. |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 04:34:26 AM AEST
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| Pal... I've gotta say this is a truly good poem. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by chrissypooh on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 04:48:02 PM AEST
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THIS IS GOOD
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Crys on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 11:08:21 PM AEST
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This is very beautiful. I love the ending. It's written so well, great write!
*~*Crys*~* |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Kimmie_mac on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 10:44:08 AM AEST
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| A touching poem well written. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 04:31:17 PM AEST
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I see the sun risin, it's gettin bright
So I'll go inside and turn out the light
Climb in my bed and go to sleep
As one last tear rolls down my cheek
I sent this one to my sister. She and her boyfriend broke up... and this is precisely what she did. You helped me understand... I'm speechless. |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Breezer08 on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:54:18 PM AEST
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Wow. I don't know what to say. That was BEAUTIFULLY written! I know how you felt(or still do). I went through the same thing with my old boyfriend of 2 years. I loved how you expressed every emotion. And the ending was absolutly superb! Keep up all the fantastic writing! You will go very, very far! Excellent write!
breeZer
"sing like no one is listening, dance like no one is watching, and love like you've never been hurt." - ??? |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Rawkergurl2003 on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:37:30 PM AEST
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beautifully done.. i hope he saw this. and hope you guys are still together.. it sounds like you really love him. thats somthing that will never fade. good luck with life
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Rawkergurl2003 on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:37:31 PM AEST
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beautifully done.. i hope he saw this. and hope you guys are still together.. it sounds like you really love him. thats somthing that will never fade. good luck with life
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:29:24 PM AEST
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A wonderful apology poem, I hope things work out.
Spazzo |
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