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Keeping my sanity
Contributed by
caughtinadream
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:28:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Desperately diving into the depths of your soul
Silently screaming for God to make me whole.
Pondering the echos of your voice in my head
Simply praying for a safe place to be led.
Wonderous moments I hold in my heart
Yet shaking, for I seem to be falling apart.
Suddenly sinking and I don't know why
I realized I have been living a lie.
Over me the devil cast his spell
Where right into your arms I fell.
I break free of these chains just in time
Retrieving the sanity that rightfully is mine.
Each day I improve more and more
I refuse to lose my faith; its what I live for.
Copyright ©
caughtinadream
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2004-12-08 19:28:30]
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Re: Keeping my sanity
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by EternalNight4x on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:33:16 PM AEST
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| great write..well expressed keep it up |
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Re: Keeping my sanity
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by waos on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:44:06 PM AEST
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| not bad; i like the hopefullness at the end of it. i thought you did a good job of portraying the path that people can go on. good work. |
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Re: Keeping my sanity
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:43:05 PM AEST
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| amazing write. i loved it. keep it up. =] |
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Re: Keeping my sanity
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:57:02 PM AEST
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oh kristen..you insane little devil child..what am i going to do with you..haha JUST KIDDING..your sane and i love you :o)
Great write too..you never fail to amaze me ..and make me completely jealous :-p
I`d tell you to keep it up..but i already know you will :)
-- Kaylee |
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Re: Keeping my sanity
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:21:44 PM AEST
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Very well written Keeping your sanity.
~DENNIS~ |
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